[Poetry – Guest post]
In the depths of love, pain takes its toll,
Like shards of glass that pierce my soul.
With every beat of my heart, it aches,
Embracing sorrows, my spirit breaks.
Love is a melody, sweet and serene,
But pain lurks beneath, unseen.
An ethereal dance of joy and despair,
Leaving my heart tangled in its snare.
Your love ignited a fire deep within,
Yet my heart also bears the pain, akin.
For every moment of pure bliss,
A bittersweet ache, I cannot dismiss.
Love, a tapestry woven with threads,
Pain, a shadow that relentlessly spreads.
Bound together, they intertwine,
A paradoxical symphony, both divine.
Through love’s pain, I find strength anew,
For it deepens my love, pure and true.
In the darkest nights, I learn to endure,
Knowing love’s pain is but love’s allure.
So, I embrace love’s exquisite agony,
For it molds me into what I’m meant to be.
In the tapestry of love and pain, I find,
A love so profound, it’s one of a kind.
In love’s embrace, a delicate dance had begun,
Two souls entwined, beneath the morning sun.
But fate, capricious, weaves its tangled thread,
And soon the tender words are left unsaid.
Passion’s fire, once ablaze, now turned to ash,
As whispered promises fade into the past.
Heartbreak’s bitter sting, a cruel refrain,
Echoes of love lost, lingering in pain.
Yet in the darkness, hope begins to bloom,
A seed of resilience amidst the gloom.
For from the ruins, new strength can arise,
And healing whispers echo through tear-stained skies.
Though love may falter, and hearts may break,
It’s in the shattered pieces, beauty wakes.
For in the depths of sorrow’s endless sea,
Love’s true essence finds its way to be free.
So let the tears fall like gentle rain,
Washing away the echoes of the pain.
For in the cycle of love’s ebb and flow,
We find the courage to let our hearts grow.
❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
This is a guest post by my niece Aakansha Chhetri (View her Instagram page of poems here)
❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
This blog post is a part of the blog challenge ‘BlogaberryDazzle’ hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla in collaboration with Mads’ Cookhouse.
Your niece is very talented! A lovely poem!
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lovely poem. love and pain are 2 sides of the same coin, isnt it? and the questions it asks of us teach us so much.
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What a beautiful piece of writing! I loved the way Aakansha has articulated the emotions in an enthralling manner. Loved the depth beneath the words.
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Thank you Shifali
… will convey your msg to her.
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what a lovely choice of words here. She is truly blessed to have such talents.
here are my favourite lines
Your love ignited a fire deep within,Yet my heart also bears the pain, akin.For every moment of pure bliss,A bittersweet ache, I cannot dismiss.
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Thank you Sindhu… will pass on your comment to Aakansha
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A big round of applause to Akanksha.. At such young age such deep emotions are rare to see. With love comes the pain and the deeper the love, deeper will be the pain and she has articulated beautifully.
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Thank you Swati… will pass on your comment to her.
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Your niece wrote this, Kaveri? She must be young! The poem is so profound and the words touch a chord. Love and pain do go hand in hand. Do give her my blessings.
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Thank you Harjeet… will convey
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It takes a significant level of understanding to articulate this emotion so beautifully.
This couplet was my favorite.
So, I embrace love’s exquisite agony,
For it molds me into what I’m meant to be.
Such a sad yet positive poem. Please convey my congratulations to your niece.
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Thank you Raghav… will convey your msg
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Thats a rhyming poem on the deepest emotion known. Beautiful
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A beautiful piece with a lot of maturity. Love and pain are often intertwined. Do convey my appreciation to your niece, Kaveri. I will sure check out her Instagram page.
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Thank you Ritu… will pass on your comment to Aakansha.
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I have this motto, “Jyaan prem hoi tyaan pain to hoi aj” It’s in Gujarati and roughly translates to ‘Wherever there is love, there is bound to be pain”. Your poem perfectly captured that emotion and in such beautiful lines. My favorites were,
Bound together, they intertwine,
A paradoxical symphony, both divine.
Uff!
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Thank you for your sweet words Manali. It’s my niece’s poem😊… will convey your comment to her.
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Wow how beautifully this poe, captures the intertwined nature of love and pain. The imagery is vivid, with lines like “shards of glass piercing the soul.” It’s indeed a touching reminder that love, with all its twists and turns, is ultimately a journey worth embracing. Loved reading it.
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Love and pain intertwined in such a beautiful yet heartbreaking way. Please extend my thanks to your niece for sharing such raw emotions through her words.
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Thank you Neha… will do!
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In the poem I find the emotions of love so true and touchy, I can feel the pain which are true element of pure love. Just the way a rose is beautiful but when you try to hold to praise it beauty the thorns are there to hurt but we still love rose. Love is one such emotion which comes with pain and that’s why we recognize and appreciate the essence of love. Very well penned poetry.
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Thank you Samata… will share your comment with my niece
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The bittersweet story of love is very beautiful represented in these lines. Very beautifully written.
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Thank you Janaki… will share your comments with Aakansha
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Please extend my appreciation and admiration to Aakansha. Checked out her Insta page – her poems are like little gems of emotion. It’s incredible how she captures the raw essence of different feelings.
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Thank you Felicia… will let Aakansha know
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I love how in-depth the poem was. Checked her Instagram. amazing content with meaningful words that flow,
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Thank you Sadvika… will convey your msg to her.
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Your niece is very talented. I checked the insta page as well, she writes such poignant verses.
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Thank you Ambica… will share your comment with her.
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Akanksha has so much potential! I just read Pablo Neruda’s “Twenty Love poems and a song of despair” and akanksha’s poem shares the same passion and pain that love evokes.
Immensely beautiful expression!
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Thank you Preeti… will convey your msg to Aakansha
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Your poem beautifully captures the intricate dance between love and heartbreak. It resonates deeply with the universal experience of navigating the joys and sorrows of romantic entanglements. Thank you for sharing such heartfelt and evocative verses.
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Thank you Priya… it’s my niece who wrote it😊
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We have a budding writer 🫶🏻
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Lovely poem!
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Thank you… will convey to Aakansha
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